There it was right in front of me, the most enormous, scariest, contraption I had seen. A roller coaster. How could anyone expect me to get on a 50 meter tall ride that would take me through hundreds of twists and turns even making me go upside down? I looked up at the people already on the ride screaming and shouting and the butterflies that were already in my stomach doubled. Then I felt someone pull at my arm, it was our turn to ride the roller coaster. I slowly trudged up to the ride and got in my seat, unaware of all the people around me, feeling more and more nervous every second. Suddenly with a sickening jerk, we started to move and with all the wind screaming in my ears I could hardly hear my own shouting. We were going so fast that I thought I would fall off any minute and I tightened my grip on the handle until my hands felt sore. Now, we were going over millions of twists and turns, up and down, left and right, until finally we jolted to a stop. I felt half sick as I stumbled out of our cart and walked on to the ground. My hands still ached and my head felt so dizzy that I was surprised I hadn't fallen down yet.
"Well, how did you like that?" My friend asked, bringing me back into focus.
I looked at her for a while, and then smiled, " That was fun, lets do that again!"
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I like your introduction it really sets the paragraph really well. i like the way you have showed me about the entire experience rather than telling me how everything happened.
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